Comments on: Page 83: Whut-Oh!

By: Pat

Pat — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 04:22:11 +0000

Trouble at dad o’clock……… ha ha ha bobby you kill me.

By: David Kastrup

David Kastrup — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 11:40:14 +0000

Hm, everybody is talking about Guy proposing to Ana… That does not even make sense: he would have to let on that he eavesdropped. And he definitely is the one who has been fighting all the time to keep the door open for Ana.

I should think that in the end she will be the one proposing to him. While she had a sort-of moment earlier, it was not as much a proposition rather than a preproposition: making sure that at least the basics would be there.

Now we do have the angle of Guy pulling Mr. Tyler away from the TV. That could mean that Guy’s mother is an old flame of Mr. Tyler, and Guy and Ana happen to be half-siblings tragically.

Yes, a bit too much Greek tragedy and Deus ex Machina. There you are.

By: Rosebud

Rosebud — Fri, 20 Jun 2008 01:54:33 +0000

Bobby writes: Stasia and her dad donâ€™t say a word to each other in the entire book.
Awwwww. Perchance a hug or look of approval? Dare I dream of reconciliation?

Tseng writes [evil plot possibilities]:
May you get a wasting virus that causes you to switch from writing to writing sappy, romantic novellas, which drives you from your unread misery to star writer fame, just in time for you to die young. That would fit so nicely with your story lines!

Bobby writes: No â€œcut out pagesâ€ â€” everythingâ€™s just tightened, shortened.
Perchance an extended scenes version? =D Although, in fairness, shorter is probably better when it comes to making a movie. Longer stories require cutting. And with “a page a day” at this point, there’s nothing we can complain about!

By: Dingbat

Dingbat — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 01:21:55 +0000

The plot Thickens!

gotta say this is gonna make the last few pages even more interesting, looking forward to them Bobby!

and Eisu i love how you did the colouring with the big revelation on the “are you married” front, especially the slight darkening of the background in panel 5, it holds the moment brilliantly with Ana’s face

thanks for all the effort your putting into this!
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Ding

By: Bobby Crosby

Bobby Crosby — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 00:51:37 +0000

There’s six hours left in the day.

By: Z

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 00:49:27 +0000

When are we going to see the next page? I heard there was going to be one released everyday.

By: Bobby Crosby

Bobby Crosby — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 00:36:14 +0000

Read the comic again, then. It’s best to just read it all in one sitting anyway. Can’t imagine someone just reading it one page a time once a week or so — not smart.

By: LazerWulf

LazerWulf — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 00:31:39 +0000

P.S. If this was the second time Guy eavesdropped, when was the first time? I honestly don’t remember.

By: LazerWulf

LazerWulf — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 00:29:02 +0000

I think even if Guy couldn’t hear what Janny said, he’s definitely at least watching, and can deduce one of two things based on Ana’s expression.

1) Ana’s expression is a reaction to them actually being married. This would reveal that she actually is mortified at the thought of being married to Guy, which would make Guy’s expression plausible, as he is sad that Ana doesn’t truly love him. However, based on their 10-minute kiss and their experiences over the past day or two would seem to prove this theory false. Which would lead him to conclude that:

2) Ana’s expression is a reaction to them NOT actually being married. This means Guy’s expression is more out of empathy (which would make sense, as he is a guidance councilor, who is supposed to be good at empathy) for a friend who’s fairy-tale dream just came crashing down around her.

But since Bobby has said that he did overhear, this makes the above deductions unnecessary.

By: Coughman

Coughman — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 23:03:27 +0000

DAD SMASH!