Comments on: Page 7: First Hour http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/ A GRAPHIC NOVEL WRITTEN BY BOBBY CROSBY AND ILLUSTRATED BY REMY "EISU" MOKHTAR, NEW PAGES EVERY MWF Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:39:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Shamus http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-2/#comment-12795 Shamus Sun, 06 Apr 2008 23:09:08 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-12795 Liking what I've read so-far. I re: montage - I sort of guessed with the different coloured lyrics, but i think costume changes would have been more effective. Keep it coming Liking what I’ve read so-far. I re: montage – I sort of guessed with the different coloured lyrics, but i think costume changes would have been more effective. Keep it coming

]]> By: Wolf http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-2/#comment-12079 Wolf Tue, 18 Mar 2008 15:41:48 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-12079 "Who?" rofl “Who?”

rofl

]]> By: MARRY ME » Archive » Page 14: I Would? http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-2/#comment-552 MARRY ME » Archive » Page 14: I Would? Mon, 02 Apr 2007 07:08:26 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-552 [...] get on her bad side. I wonder how she’ll react when she sees Guy. And by the way, if Parker knows who Gary is, she’ll of course be able to recognize Stasia’s sister. We’ll learn a little more [...] [...] get on her bad side. I wonder how she’ll react when she sees Guy. And by the way, if Parker knows who Gary is, she’ll of course be able to recognize Stasia’s sister. We’ll learn a little more [...]

]]> By: Bobby Crosby http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-147 Bobby Crosby Thu, 08 Mar 2007 20:02:10 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-147 Eisu's the best. Got him the script for Page 8 yesterday, right when he was about to go to work unfortunately, so we're just gonna put that page up on Friday, and then hopefully we won't miss a day for a long time. I should have been further ahead with the scripts to make up for a possible illness, but I'm too lazy! Eisu’s the best. Got him the script for Page 8 yesterday, right when he was about to go to work unfortunately, so we’re just gonna put that page up on Friday, and then hopefully we won’t miss a day for a long time. I should have been further ahead with the scripts to make up for a possible illness, but I’m too lazy!

]]> By: Valerie http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-146 Valerie Thu, 08 Mar 2007 19:50:48 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-146 Wow, Eisu's drawing seems to have fit that description perfectly. o_o You two make an awesome team! Wow, Eisu’s drawing seems to have fit that description perfectly. o_o You two make an awesome team!

]]> By: Bobby Crosby http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-145 Bobby Crosby Wed, 07 Mar 2007 21:30:38 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-145 Here's that panel's description -- ------ Panel 5: Shot of Stasia from behind, standing on the stage now, her back to us, but she's turning her head to look at us out of the corner of her eye. I imagine her legs spread out a little and her arms down at her sides, maybe her hands balled up in fists? And if you want we can see another dancer or two near her doing the same pose. Her expression should be playful, sexy maybe. And I imagine the bottom of the panel being just below her butt (so that would also include her hands/fists probably). ------ Gonna try to finish up the script for Page 8 now. Here’s that panel’s description –
——
Panel 5: Shot of Stasia from behind, standing on the stage now, her back to us, but she’s turning her head to look at us out of the corner of her eye. I imagine her legs spread out a little and her arms down at her sides, maybe her hands balled up in fists? And if you want we can see another dancer or two near her doing the same pose. Her expression should be playful, sexy maybe. And I imagine the bottom of the panel being just below her butt (so that would also include her hands/fists probably).
——

Gonna try to finish up the script for Page 8 now.

]]> By: Valerie http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-144 Valerie Wed, 07 Mar 2007 20:27:09 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-144 Wow, I love the look in the second to last panel^^ She looks great! Wow, I love the look in the second to last panel^^ She looks great!

]]> By: Tamanegi http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-143 Tamanegi Wed, 07 Mar 2007 19:33:37 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-143 Hm, get well soon, so this awesome comic can continue ;) Take it slowly. Thanks for letting us know in any case, so we don't check back every day only to be disappointed... ^^; Hm, get well soon, so this awesome comic can continue ;) Take it slowly.
Thanks for letting us know in any case, so we don’t check back every day only to be disappointed… ^^;

]]> By: Bobby Crosby http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-142 Bobby Crosby Wed, 07 Mar 2007 18:46:28 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-142 Sorry, guys, still super sick. Wrote all the dialogue for Page 8 yesterday, but wasn't able to write the descriptions for the art. Hopefully soon. Sorry, guys, still super sick. Wrote all the dialogue for Page 8 yesterday, but wasn’t able to write the descriptions for the art. Hopefully soon.

]]> By: Eisu http://marryme.keenspot.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/comment-page-1/#comment-141 Eisu Wed, 07 Mar 2007 16:27:13 +0000 http://www.marrymemovie.com/main/2007/03/02/page-7-no-dropping/#comment-141 Bobby's sick, so the comic doesn't have any new pages yet, I told him to get as much rest as he can and not force himself to write this too much... so hey, when he's ready, we'll get back on track Bobby’s sick, so the comic doesn’t have any new pages yet, I told him to get as much rest as he can and not force himself to write this too much… so hey, when he’s ready, we’ll get back on track

]]>